Horndawg |PRJ|: OKAY, DOES ANYONE HAVE ANY SORT OF OUTLINE ON WHAT THEY WANT THE PLOT TO BE ABOUT? Dottedline disconnected. Horndawg |PRJ|: ANYTHING, EVEN A SINGLE PHRASE THAT DETAILS THE MAIN FOCAL POINT Archive: Boy meets girls, boy chooses one girl, the end. BiN4RY: romance Horndawg |PRJ|: :I Archive: :I Kybe ^.^: how about a mysterrryyyy BiN4RY: no archive, that sucks BiN4RY: too cliche [wcm]Mildob: with a dash of super natural Archive: Yours sucks. Archive: Fine Archive: How about thi [wcm]Mildob: yes, mystery is also good Archive: s Horndawg |PRJ|: Mysteries are pretty hard to be original in Kybe ^.^: A supernatural mystery? [wcm]Mildob: and works in VNs Kybe ^.^: including time travel Horndawg |PRJ|: But they're pretty easy to make, I have to admit BiN4RY: my idea for the intro is for the mc to move into the new town Archive: Boy meets girls, chooses one girl, girl dies, boy chooses another girl, she dies, etc. [wcm]Mildob: Binary, not now Kybe ^.^: Boy looks for a explanation to this phenomina? Archive: Sure. Dottedline entered chat. Kybe ^.^: how about something instead of dieees Archive: No. [wcm]Mildob: ok, everyone hold fire for a sec Horndawg |PRJ|: Okay, we're getting somewhere. Let's brainstorm on what the phenomenon will be Dottedline: argh.. my internet is so crappy [wcm]Mildob: waaaaiiiit Horndawg |PRJ|: I AM WAITING Archive: I'm not. Archive: :q: BiN4RY: how about we just let the mc to stick with one girl, but have numerous other girls liking him at the same time Kybe ^.^: I think they should have, extremely unfortunate events happen to themmm BiN4RY: kinda like clannad Archive: No. Archive: They die. Kybe ^.^: Can we not do something generic? Kybe ^.^: K Binary? BiN4RY: no Archive: Why can't they die? BiN4RY: k. Horndawg |PRJ|: Or like, we can just not make it so focused on the romance (because I know that you only want that because you want sex scenes) and actually focus on an intriguing plot Kybe ^.^: Because I dont like killing cute girls :V BiN4RY: exactly Archive: Tough shit. Kybe ^.^: how about the first one dies Horndawg |PRJ|: No Kybe ^.^: and he manages to save the second one Horndawg |PRJ|: No Horndawg |PRJ|: How about [wcm]Mildob: this is why we cant have nice thing,s we're supposed to be discussing plot outlines and you guys are talking about plot devices Kybe ^.^: but shit keeps happening to her almost killing her and he has to find out whyyy Horndawg |PRJ|: We first discuss on what we want the mystery to be about Archive: This way we can throw romance in there somewhere and this phenomenem makes it so he has to cross an obstical to be with the girl he likes. Kybe ^.^: Mildob I dont know the fucking difference between those terms [wcm]Mildob: then learn2english Archive: Plot Device deals with things that'll move the plot. Horndawg |PRJ|: the plot is the story, plot devices are things that move the story Archive: Plot Outline is the actual what's going on in that world. [wcm]Mildob: right [wcm]Mildob: thank you Kybe ^.^: okay Kybe ^.^: So, the reason for these things are... [wcm]Mildob: anyway, if you want to talk about these things like x dies or whatever Horndawg |PRJ| headdesk [wcm]Mildob: keep it in your head [wcm]Mildob: or write it down [wcm]Mildob: we'll deal with it later [wcm]Mildob: right now Horndawg |PRJ|: Yes, what milblob said [wcm]Mildob: BASIIIC plot [wcm]Mildob: :x Kybe ^.^: okay Horndawg |PRJ|: Basic plot = A mystery / phenomenon of some kind. Any suggestions? Archive: Anybody the guy likes and starts a relationship with dies. Kybe ^.^: Boy is cursed because of X Horndawg |PRJ|: That's too coincidental Kybe ^.^: And thus "Archive: Anybody the guy likes and starts a relationship with dies." [wcm]Mildob: Archive: Anybody the guy likes and starts a relationship with dies. [wcm]Mildob: this [wcm]Mildob: but not the MC BiN4RY: this idea will make the story end too quickly imo [wcm]Mildob: the main girl Kybe ^.^: Because of a curse Archive: Oh. Archive: That's good. Kybe ^.^: but does it try to kill her? [wcm]Mildob: the main girl should have that curse, boy could be researching this Archive: Yeah. Kybe ^.^: I think the MC should have the curse BiN4RY: me :D Horndawg |PRJ|: No binary, not you Archive: Then we can experience first hand as to what's trying to kill him. Kybe ^.^: and be confused by it BiN4RY: no i think everything should revolve with the MC Archive: That's tooo clicheeeeee Archive: *whiiineee* Dottedline disconnected. BiN4RY: and that is how most animes are Archive: Tough shit. [wcm]Mildob: no because then the MC's thoughts (which take up 70% of a VN's text) would be all emo and shit Kybe ^.^: how much action of stuff trying to kill you can you really do in a VN god damn it [wcm]Mildob: do not want Archive: 1 x agree Horndawg |PRJ|: okay Archive: Hang on. Horndawg |PRJ|: How about [wcm]Mildob: "OH GOOOD I KILLED ANOTHER ONE CRRYYYY" Kybe ^.^: rofl [wcm]Mildob: thats meant to be god~ not good~ [wcm]Mildob: anyhow Archive: I like dis idea. The main girl character has a 'curse' of where anyone she gets into a relationship with dies. She gets scared when she starts to have feelings for the MC, further on the line of the story we can actually see what's doing the killing. [wcm]Mildob: so cursed character Kybe ^.^: i kinda like OH GOOD I KILLED ANOTHER ONE CRRYYYY more :V [wcm]Mildob: idea 1 Archive: Which would be really interesting. Archive: And give a new perspective to the base story. Kybe ^.^: I like that Archive [wcm]Mildob: me too [wcm]Mildob: any other thoughts on this guys? Dottedline entered chat. Kybe ^.^: MC notices that she has feelings for him and he has feelings for her too [DS] Kamikaze entered chat. Kybe ^.^: tries to find out why shes running away from it [wcm]Mildob: are we "go" for girl is cursed? Kybe ^.^: him* Kybe ^.^: I'm down with it Archive: I don't think it should be an actuall curse though, more like something is behind it. Horndawg |PRJ|: Cursed character is idea 1 Archive: I just can't think of what yet... Kybe ^.^: Like what Kybe ^.^: a crazy serial killer? Horndawg |PRJ|: Archive, what about Archive: Maybe insane parents, a supernatural thing, etc. [wcm]Mildob: yeah i was planning on bringing that up in a minute: supernatura curse or whatnot Horndawg |PRJ|: Okay, we're not going to have this super realistic, right? Kybe ^.^: Insane parents sounds interesting, but rather unrealistic [wcm]Mildob: yandere? Horndawg |PRJ|: supernatural would be the way to go Archive: I think some sort of attached creature or animal would be jealous or something. Archive: I dunno. Horndawg |PRJ|: Maybe like Kybe ^.^: I like the idea of a super natural curse more though [wcm]Mildob: i cant really think of how it would work outside of being supernatural Kybe ^.^: exatly Archive: Yeah... Horndawg |PRJ|: The girl's family line has the duty of housing a malevolent being in their offspring. Kybe ^.^: exactly* Kybe ^.^: ehh Kybe ^.^: I dont like that Archive: Ehh. [wcm]Mildob: thats not really... if we're keeping it semi realistic then the cops would surely be on to that family [wcm]Mildob: i think the only option would be paranormal Kybe ^.^: How about every female child of the family is cursed to never have a romantic life because of something a REALLY LONG AGO grandmother did Kybe ^.^: like dumping some acient mage or whatever [wcm]Mildob: sisterrrrssss Archive: I think just some sort of supernatural creature would be decent. If it's a creature then you can't really call it too unrealistic, it being attached to her is normal for animals. Archive: Etc. BiN4RY: or the girl is a reincarnated goddess from the past [wcm]Mildob: /demon BiN4RY: similar to Misuzu from Air :D Kybe ^.^: Hey Horndawg |PRJ|: Plot twist, she's a ghost Kybe ^.^: I havent finished Air yet Kybe ^.^: so stfu [wcm]Mildob: same BiN4RY: that piece of information is unessesary Archive: None of that ancestor bullshit though. Kybe ^.^: hm BiN4RY: no fuk u Archive: >:C Archive: BiN4RY #1 cliche lover. [wcm]Mildob: how about that plot twist that everyone HATES - protip, SHE DOESNT EXIST LOLOLOL Dottedline: lol Kybe ^.^: lol. Archive: >:| [wcm]Mildob: commence headbutting of the screen etc Kybe ^.^: then who was phone [wcm]Mildob: (yeah, fuck you fight club) Horndawg |PRJ|: Plot twist head over turn, no one exists, save the girl Kybe ^.^: lol BiN4RY: plot twist, she dies. Kybe ^.^: plot twist, they realise they are in a NV Kybe ^.^: VN* BiN4RY: lol wtf Archive: Then it turns out it's the CLANNAD dream girl going insane and making up a world. [wcm]Mildob: novel visual? Horndawg |PRJ|: 4th wall breaking is so bleh [wcm]Mildob: sweet jesus BiN4RY: and then *spoils from air removed* Kybe ^.^: jesus sweet you mean [wcm]Mildob: :@ Horndawg |PRJ|: Okay Horndawg |PRJ|: So we're really goign to go with this idea? Archive: The supernatural curse? [wcm]Mildob: well, lets keep it as an option Kybe ^.^: If by idea you mean... [wcm]Mildob: dont want to commit to anything till we've consisdered other posibilities Kybe ^.^: Girl cursed, everyone she loves that she is unrelated to by blood dies... Horndawg |PRJ|: The idea being that there is a cursed character that kills whoever they get into a relationship with Kybe ^.^: Okay Kybe ^.^: yeah Horndawg |PRJ|: Any other ideas? Archive: Uhm. Kybe ^.^: I like that idea Archive: Hrm. BiN4RY: i wanted a romance vn, but you guys were liek noooo [wcm]Mildob: so, cursed girl is IDEA 1 Kybe ^.^: It has romance and mystery and an open option for horror Archive: This can be romance. Horndawg |PRJ|: I personally have an idea that I've been trying to write up a plot for [wcm]Mildob: it would still be romance foo' Kybe ^.^: Okay Archive: In fact this would be an amazing romance if executed right. Dottedline: dont do horror.. BiN4RY: yea, a girl dies everytime she falls in love Archive: So. Kybe ^.^: is someone writing this down BiN4RY: that is so romantic Kybe ^.^: no Dottedline: it would be like saya no uta if you do horror Kybe ^.^: a GUY dies [wcm]Mildob: okay everyone quiet time while Kstyle says his idea Kybe ^.^: unless shes bi/les Archive: ITC BiN4RY is a dumbe. Teh man disconnected. BiN4RY: ITC Archive being an idiot Archive: Nah. Kybe ^.^: is someone writing this down? Kybe ^.^: Both of you shut the fuck up Archive: I'll get it. [wcm]Mildob: its called copy and paste Kybe ^.^: kk Teh man entered chat. Kybe ^.^: hold on brb Horndawg |PRJ|: I'll be writing this all down Horndawg |PRJ|: Just give me a moment to think of how to say this BiN4RY: save it to the ftp [wcm]Mildob: did you say you had an idea to pitch? Horndawg |PRJ|: Yeah, but I don't know how to say it Archive: Hang on niggers. [wcm]Mildob: ok, while you work on that, anyone else? Archive: I thought we were going in a circle or some shit. Horndawg |PRJ|: In one phrase, I can say that it involves the mafia / yakuza / etc. Horndawg |PRJ|: fuck circles, this is a rectangle [wcm]Mildob: that's only if people cant learn how to stfu Archive: Where BiN4RY would shut the fuck up and listen and not be dumb while the smart people talked. [wcm]Mildob: but we're doing ok at the moment [wcm]Mildob: i havent had to use ANGRY CAPS yet so its all good Archive: ANGRY SODA CAPS. BiN4RY: i'm even saying anything you dumb fuck Archive: See, he agrees. [wcm]Mildob: no fighting in the war room Kybe ^.^: :V Kybe ^.^: but srsly you two, take it to PMs or whatever [wcm]Mildob: ^ Dottedline: okok, what about there is a horrible natural disaster incoming (lets say a hurricane or a nuke detonates) and all the kiddies have to evac, and in the monent, the MC gets lost and gets picked up by another evacuating band thats (coincidentially) all girls Archive: Kay I called him a fagget in Steam Messanger. Kybe ^.^: Dont tell us Kybe ^.^: srsly Archive: :3 [wcm]Mildob: quiet Kybe ^.^: DottedLine, I like that idea Archive: Ehhh. Archive: Semi, Kybe ^.^: I dont think a hurrican or nuke make sense though [wcm]Mildob: dot, anymore to add to that before we pick it to pieces? Archive: It's a bit "Harem" Kybe ^.^: yeah Archive: Can we make it so it's more like, just a normal evacuation pack. Dottedline: nah [wcm]Mildob: Archive: Can we make it so it's more like, just a normal evacuation pack. Teh man disconnected. [wcm]Mildob: this Horndawg |PRJ|: Japan is getting flooded so you have to evac Kybe ^.^: yeah Kybe ^.^: uhmm Kybe ^.^: Not flooded... Horndawg |PRJ|: It's sinking Horndawg |PRJ|: lol Archive: :v Teh man entered chat. [wcm]Mildob: yeah, X super disaster, we can work that out later [wcm]Mildob: whats important is: [wcm]Mildob: would it work in a VN? Horndawg |PRJ|: Nope [wcm]Mildob: it would be great for an anime [wcm]Mildob: infact i want one Kybe ^.^: How about a mysterious event happens causing a renosanse cascade and the people evcuate to avoid the alien race that combines lots of thier coqured races into stuff Horndawg |PRJ|: There's not that much change in environment BiN4RY: no HL reference pls [wcm]Mildob: exactly what i was about to say Kstyle Kybe ^.^: WHAT EVER DO YOU MEAN BINARY [wcm]Mildob: VNs all have one thing in common Kybe ^.^: That would be? Dottedline disconnected. [wcm]Mildob: a variety of areas, but you always return to them [wcm]Mildob: eg [wcm]Mildob: the school [wcm]Mildob: the cafe [wcm]Mildob: the officle [wcm]Mildob: the school [wcm]Mildob: the cafe [wcm]Mildob: the office Kybe ^.^: hm [wcm]Mildob: in an evac Kybe ^.^ is not a fan of that. [wcm]Mildob: you'd be constantly on the move Kybe ^.^: Well yeah Kybe ^.^: so? Kybe ^.^: We're gonna be photoshoppin BGs anyway [wcm]Mildob: it breaks the VN formula >:C Kybe ^.^: Cry about it [wcm]Mildob: k Kybe ^.^: ORRR ORRRR ORRRR BiN4RY: oh speaking of which, I think i can find a girl that is very good at drawing anime stuff to help you guys Kybe ^.^: the evacuation Kybe ^.^: is only a small part of it Archive: Is she a faggot? Horndawg |PRJ|: MC moves to a new town. Life goes on all normally, he meets a few people and makes friends with them. Life goes on like an average life. Until he meets someone who can apparently transverse across different realities [wcm]Mildob: probably Archive: Haruhi? [wcm]Mildob: hold on kstyle Horndawg |PRJ|: traverse Kybe ^.^: I like that idea... actually... [wcm]Mildob: hold the phone [wcm]Mildob: yeah same but we're not done with evac Horndawg |PRJ|: So he gets into an accident with the person and is dumped into an alternate reality Kybe ^.^: Shh Horndawg |PRJ|: I thought we discarded that Kybe ^.^: Evac idea Horndawg |PRJ|: Okay Kybe ^.^: Still thinkg about it Kybe ^.^: The evac could be a thing that happened in the past? Horndawg |PRJ|: well keep flinging ideas, I have notepad up [wcm]Mildob: so, evacuated to.... Kybe ^.^: and in the preset they havea small community of reffugees set up Kybe ^.^: it was a world devestating event Kybe ^.^: and now they have a small peaceful comunnity Horndawg |PRJ|: "-Think, beginning of TTGL" Horndawg |PRJ|: derp [wcm]Mildob: hurr Kybe ^.^: but someone on the inside of the community Kybe ^.^: is doing something Archive: I'm confused, what's going on again? Dottedline entered chat. Horndawg |PRJ|: Archive, evac idea Horndawg |PRJ|: Like, FO3 combined with TTGL BiN4RY: oh god. Archive: Oh. Kybe ^.^: SHIT HAPPENED -> RAN THE FUCK AWAY -> SETTLED DOWN -> SHITS HAPPENING AGAIN Archive: Pfft. Kybe ^.^: and yeah pretty much Kybe ^.^: Except more like, TTGL + Stalker [wcm]Mildob: thing is though Archive: Ehhhh. [wcm]Mildob: i doubt it would work in a VN Horndawg |PRJ|: I haven't played stalker Archive: it wouldn't. Horndawg |PRJ|: And what Milblob said Archive: STALKER is amazing Kybe ^.^: Yeah it probably wouldnt Kybe ^.^: and yes STALKER is amazing [wcm]Mildob: shame we're not making an anime :@ Kybe ^.^: :V Horndawg |PRJ|: pff Kybe ^.^: true true [wcm]Mildob: shit would be rad Horndawg |PRJ|: shame? Archive: Ew. Horndawg |PRJ|: It's a blessing that we're not Archive: Yeah. Horndawg |PRJ|: It would die and we would all be disgraced Kybe ^.^: True dat Dottedline disconnected. [wcm]Mildob: no i mean if we actually had the means to make one [wcm]Mildob: a good one at that Kybe ^.^: So, what are we doing [wcm]Mildob: like we do with this VN Horndawg |PRJ|: So the evac idea, y/n? Kybe ^.^: n [wcm]Mildob: ok, so is evac idea out of the window? Kybe ^.^: yar Horndawg |PRJ|: I'll keep it on note just in case [wcm]Mildob: right, IDEA 2, evacuation, discarded for now Horndawg |PRJ|: Horndawg |PRJ|: MC moves to a new town. Life goes on all normally, he meets a few people and makes friends with them. Life goes on like an average life. Until he meets someone who can apparently traverse across different realities Horndawg |PRJ|: So he gets into an accident with the person and is dumped into an alternate reality Archive: Ehh. BiN4RY: why do i have a feeling that this VN is going get turned into a mecha genre next? [wcm]Mildob: but yeah, keep a note incase someone else can bring more ideas about it to the table later on [wcm]Mildob: because shut up BiN4RY: i don't even understand the story line right now Horndawg |PRJ|: There is no set storyline Loki entered chat. [wcm]Mildob: YOU'RE LATE BiN4RY: well, genre or whatever you guys were discussing [wcm]Mildob: we started ages ago Dottedline entered chat. Kybe ^.^: brb vacuming rooom Archive: I still like the cursed idea, it's at least a new idea. It could even combine with the Evac idea. Kybe ^.^: Nah Kybe ^.^: Evac would be too hard Kybe ^.^: I like the orginal cursed idea [wcm]Mildob: can someone give Loki the low down [wcm]Mildob: what we've discussed etc Archive: Neat. [wcm]Mildob: in PMs [wcm]Mildob: so anyway [wcm]Mildob: altern reality idea as put forward by kstyle [wcm]Mildob: expand [wcm]Mildob: what kind of alternate reality? Archive: I honestly don't really like it... The whole super girl thing is kinda ehhh. Horndawg |PRJ|: I haven't exactly thought of that really, but it's more like Kybe ^.^: It isn't a super girl Kybe ^.^: It's a cursed girl Kybe ^.^: she isn't incontrol of it either Horndawg |PRJ|: You're living in one reality, but you're suddenly in another one with slightly altered things BiN4RY: that is hawt Archive: We're talking Horndawgs idea aren't we? Kybe ^.^: yes Dottedline: ohh.. like in 7 days a stranger? Archive: Meh. Horndawg |PRJ|: What? Kybe ^.^: In what? Horndawg |PRJ| looks up 7 days a stranger Dottedline: its a game yhatzee made Loki disconnected. Loki entered chat. Dottedline: oops i meant 7 days a skeptic [wcm]Mildob: oh yeah, every time someone disconnects and reconnects can someone fill them in on anything they've missed? [wcm]Mildob: same with new comers Archive: Loki you missed nothing in your short period of absence. [wcm]Mildob: anyway, dot, elaborate [wcm]Mildob: in PMs you monkey Loki: lol I just got up I was asleep [wcm]Mildob: fffff Dottedline: i actually meant trilbys notes >< Dottedline: anyways.. Horndawg |PRJ|: Stop making me read so many wiki articles, damnit Archive: We're basically going over plot ideas like 1. Cursed girl, anyone the girl starts to get into a relationship with dies. Loki: someone who's been here the whole time just select all and copy the thing into a text file when we're finished and then post it somewhere [wcm]Mildob: so what would this alternate reality bring to the plot Archive: 2. Evacuation shit. Horndawg |PRJ|: Loki, I'm doing that Archive: 3. BiN4RY being really gay @ me. Horndawg |PRJ|: Along with pruning [wcm]Mildob: lol Dottedline: in that game, people randomly warp in reality when people go into a cursed hotel (in one reality, its normal , and in the other is screwed up).. [wcm]Mildob: basically someone says a good idea for a basic plot [wcm]Mildob: we discuss the shit out of it [wcm]Mildob: then move on [wcm]Mildob: keeping the already discussed in mind Archive: So it's like Silent hill Archive: but with a random controller. Kybe ^.^: Can we possibly stop saying OH SO ITS LIKE X Horndawg |PRJ|: So the MC just wanders around after getting warped, thinking nothing is wrong since everything looks normal. He gets home and notices taht his house is for rent, and the family living in it is not his own Horndawg |PRJ|: panic Kybe ^.^: That just lowers creativity imo Archive: But it's easier to compare if you have a previous idea to say it's like. Dottedline: nah its not like that.. Kybe ^.^: Horn, that soouuundddsss interesting actually Dottedline: just play trilbys notes and youll know what im talking about Kybe ^.^: at first we shoudl have the MC go through a few normal days of his Horndawg |PRJ|: He bumps into the person again and is warped back into his own reality again Kybe ^.^: hmmm Kybe ^.^: I like it Horndawg |PRJ|: Kybe, yeah, I said in the beginning that it would be like normal life in the beginning Kybe ^.^: So, random person, when he touches her/him he changes realities? Kybe ^.^: and its always the same person in every reality Dottedline: though this alternate reality is just like saya no uta.. Kybe ^.^: that will send him b ack [wcm]Mildob: i can see a problem with this Kybe ^.^: Yes? [wcm]Mildob: after the first few reality switches [wcm]Mildob: then what Archive: He's like, "kay gotta go find x" [wcm]Mildob: he gets stuck? [wcm]Mildob: in the wrong one? [wcm]Mildob cliche alarm Horndawg |PRJ|: And so then, he is now deeply interested in this person (who for the purpose of convenience will now be referred to a girl), and now tries to find her intentionally Horndawg |PRJ|: no wait you fucker Horndawg |PRJ|: It turns out that he can't seem to get near her. He manages to catch glimpses and almost gets near enough to talk to her on several occasions, but she always seems to be a few steps ahead of him. So time goes on and he starts losing interest in the girl, dismissing the whole experience as some sort of memory lapse Horndawg |PRJ|: Turns out that she is the one that is following him, as a few days later, she approaches him and warps him to another reality with little to no notice Archive: So it's like Slender Man if he were a girl and looked human and could warp time. Horndawg |PRJ|: etc etc, this is turning into a rough draft of the plot itself. Shit happens, he figures out that the girl wants him to solve some sort of mystery regarding her abnormal ability Kybe ^.^: /facepalmheaddesk Kybe ^.^: why him? Dottedline: yea.. Horndawg |PRJ|: Same reason that you can say for any person that is chosen by special circumstances Archive: :] Teh man: did the meeting start already Horndawg |PRJ|: no Teh man: k [wcm]Mildob: sarcasm Dottedline: i thought it did already [wcm]Mildob: yes it started ages ago [wcm]Mildob: someone fill this guy in Archive: BRB. Archive: Slendermanning. Horndawg |PRJ|: wait hwat [wcm]Mildob: glhf Kybe ^.^: brb Dottedline: what were the ideas? Dottedline: 1 was curse Dottedline: 2 was evac Dottedline: and... Dottedline: ? [wcm]Mildob: 3. alternate reality [wcm]Mildob: ill explain them [wcm]Mildob : que everyone else stfu [wcm]Mildob: 1. cursed girl [wcm]Mildob: main girl has a curse of some sort that causes everyone she falls in love with to die [wcm]Mildob: self explanitory after that [wcm]Mildob: MC finds out about this, tries to get to the bottom of it [wcm]Mildob: realises they're falling in lurve [wcm]Mildob: epic race to fix the curse before he dies [wcm]Mildob: DRAMA [wcm]Mildob: etc [wcm]Mildob: 2. evacuation [wcm]Mildob: we sort of dismissed this idea on the grounds that it wouldnt work (well) in a VN, but we're keeping it open for extra discussion later [wcm]Mildob: there is some sort of large disaster across the world [wcm]Mildob: so its a post apoc' style [wcm]Mildob: romance... [wcm]Mildob: or whatever [wcm]Mildob: you can see why we dont know if it would work it not [wcm]Mildob: 3. alternate reality [wcm]Mildob: copy pasta for this one Horndawg |PRJ|: Horndawg |PRJ|: MC moves to a new town. Life goes on all normally, he meets a few people and makes friends with them. Life goes on like an average life. Until he meets someone who can apparently traverse across different realities Horndawg |PRJ|: So he gets into an accident with the person and is dumped into an alternate reality Horndawg |PRJ|: So the MC just wanders around after getting warped, thinking nothing is wrong since everything looks normal. He gets home and notices taht his house is for rent, and the family living in it is not his own Horndawg |PRJ|: He bumps into the person again and is warped back into his own reality again Horndawg |PRJ|: And so then, he is now deeply interested in this person (who for the purpose of convenience will now be referred to a girl), and now tries to find her intentionally Horndawg |PRJ|: It turns out that he can't seem to get near her. He manages to catch glimpses and almost gets near enough to talk to her on several occasions, but she always seems to be a few steps ahead of him. So time goes on and he starts losing interest in the girl, dismissing the whole experience as some sort of memory lapse Horndawg |PRJ|: Turns out that she is the one that is following him, as a few days later, she approaches him and warps him to another reality with little to no notice [wcm]Mildob: danke [wcm]Mildob: and thats where we got to [wcm]Mildob: did all the afk fags get back yet? Dottedline: ok.. Teh man: all three ideas sound good Horndawg |PRJ|: milbob, I'll just copy your plot summaries for the thing [wcm]Mildob: do both [wcm]Mildob: the fine details are needed aswell Horndawg |PRJ|: eh okay [wcm]Mildob: put the summaries on there first, then the full thing afterwards Horndawg |PRJ|: It'll take a while for me to prune it all though, but okay [wcm]Mildob: dont bother Horndawg |PRJ|: No Horndawg |PRJ|: I must OCD the extraneous chit chat out [wcm]Mildob: lets take a bit of a break till archive and kybe get back Loki: just leave the whole thing [wcm]Mildob: FINE JEEZ [wcm]Mildob: brb Kybe ^.^: ive been back Kybe ^.^: I just dunno what to add Kybe ^.^: I like the first idea of a cursed girl Loki: lol H-Scene in #3 would be epic: moving across realities mid-sexytime Kybe ^.^: Wat Horndawg |PRJ|: derp Dottedline: but in it, it would feature only one route, which is the route of the cursed girl Teh man: cursed girl sounds somewhat common, so this "curse" should be something different Kybe ^.^: /faecplam Kybe ^.^: It kills people she likes [wcm]Mildob: back Teh man: oh really Kybe ^.^: ys Dottedline: ohh.. so the route you choose alters who she kills? Teh man: that'd be boring [wcm]Mildob: negatory Kybe ^.^: youre the target Kybe ^.^: because she likes the MC Teh man: so, if this curse kills everyone she likes, i take it her parents are dead? Kybe ^.^: Orphan Dottedline: hm.. then, the route you choose alters whether you stay alive or not Kybe ^.^: ? [wcm]Mildob: also its not just "lololol that girl smiled at me, i think she lik-WUAH!" *heart attack* Kybe ^.^: Mildob Loki: how does this curse work? how does it kill people? like Final Destination style or what? Kybe ^.^: it should only kill people that she likes and she likes her back Kybe ^.^: So like, the MC puts off his death because at first he doesn't like her? Kybe ^.^: Whaddya think of that? [wcm]Mildob: no, i think it should just take a long time [wcm]Mildob: or atleast a while Kybe ^.^: that too Kybe ^.^: like a VAC ban Archive: Recent research. [wcm]Mildob: like i said, it would become a sort of race against time to get rid of the curse before the Mc gets blammo'd Kybe ^.^: yes Kybe ^.^: how do you stop the curse Kybe ^.^: and how does it kill BiN4RY: mysterious heart attack [wcm]Mildob: we can decided that if we choose to use that as the actual plot BiN4RY: sounds reasonable Dottedline: hmm, maybe the curse lowers the luck of the MC Kybe ^.^: hmm [wcm]Mildob: there is still more discussingz to go ahead Kybe ^.^: what if the curse was... Kybe ^.^: like Kybe ^.^: the curse has bloody mess merk Kybe ^.^: perk* [wcm]Mildob: dewd Dottedline: maybe one day a car almost ran over the MC and in another a meteor almost lands next to the MC Kybe ^.^: and tries to kill in the most gruesomway possible in front of the girl Kybe ^.^: but it cannot take control of living people or whatever Horndawg |PRJ|: Gantz style [wcm]Mildob: nah, she'd be absolutely fucking insane Kybe ^.^: so it can cause fires/power failures that kinda stuff Kybe ^.^: so? [wcm]Mildob: i think it should be a less messy/traumatising death Dottedline: the curse can cause bad luck Teh man: that's fucked up Kybe ^.^: so like Kybe ^.^: at worst getting crushed to death or something? [wcm]Mildob: how about a dissappearence? Kybe ^.^: no BiN4RY: even better BiN4RY: let's limit the amount of blood [wcm]Mildob: ^ Horndawg |PRJ|: no Horndawg |PRJ|: I want bloodshed Kybe ^.^: same Teh man: this is not school days faggots [wcm]Mildob: vote time Horndawg |PRJ|: Someone should get their jugulur slit, then pushed into the streets Kybe ^.^: no [wcm]Mildob: LISTEN UP FAGRATS Horndawg |PRJ|: Cars running into the body as the neck spews out blood [wcm]Mildob: vote time Teh man: k [wcm]Mildob: in decenting order [wcm]Mildob: from the chat list thingy [wcm]Mildob: is kamikaze even here? Kybe ^.^: no Kybe ^.^: i think Teh man: tropico 3 demo [wcm]Mildob: ok fuck him then Dottedline: someone message him [DS] Kamikaze was kicked by Horndawg |PRJ|. Archive: No. Horndawg |PRJ|: As the creator of that plot, I'm inclined to vote for the alternate reality one [wcm]Mildob: this is the gore vote Archive: What are we doing? Horndawg |PRJ|: oh Horndawg |PRJ|: yes for gore [wcm]Mildob: wait [wcm]Mildob: fucking Horndawg |PRJ|: Al Gore rhythm Archive: What? [wcm]Mildob: decending order Kybe ^.^: Okay guys Kybe ^.^: How about we just do deaths [wcm]Mildob: from the member list Kybe ^.^: not bloody ones Kybe ^.^: but deaths Kybe ^.^: like getting hit by a car [wcm]Mildob: well even then [wcm]Mildob: i was thinking more like "he drops dead" [wcm]Mildob: or just disappears Archive: Fuckign fill me in you ngigers. [wcm]Mildob: read up faggot BiN4RY: achive stop trolling Kybe ^.^: Exploring how the curse kills Kybe ^.^: ^ Dottedline disconnected. [wcm]Mildob: sigh Archive: Oh. [wcm]Mildob: get better internet you cunt BiN4RY: Actually I have an idea BiN4RY: the curse slowly erases the girl's memory at first BiN4RY: and then weakens her afterward Horndawg |PRJ|: ohhey reverse fuuko BiN4RY: and just dies from weakness [wcm]Mildob: i hate it Teh man: wat BiN4RY: well fuck u then [wcm]Mildob: bad end Archive: Wait what? Horndawg |PRJ|: My notepad is getting really long Archive: Did you guys decide to rape my idea? [wcm]Mildob: what idea Horndawg |PRJ|: I sorta stopped trimming it since there was a fuckton of backtalking BiN4RY: horndawg, split the damn log Archive: Curse. Horndawg |PRJ|: no [wcm]Mildob: no Archive: Kay. [wcm]Mildob: we're saying, how would the deaths happen [wcm]Mildob: the previous ones that is BiN4RY: use my idea! Archive: No. Archive: your idea is shit. BiN4RY: kick archive [wcm]Mildob: when (if?) she explains the curse to the MC Teh man: your idea doesn't make sense BiN4RY: how does'tit make sense Kybe ^.^: i dont think she should know about it a lot [wcm]Mildob: or if he finds out of his own accord Kybe ^.^: she should just know its there Kybe ^.^: but not know why or how Teh man: why does it erase her memory and why does she have to die because of lost memory? Archive: She should break down one day and tell him. BiN4RY: once the curse is active, the girl slowly looses memory, strength, and dies from it Archive: Like "Baww distance yourself bawwwew" Archive: No. Kybe ^.^: no Archive: That's stupid binary. Kybe ^.^: That's dumb Horndawg |PRJ|: She should just break down one day and go fucking psycho BiN4RY: u guys sux Kybe ^.^: A curse that kills people she likes is bad enough Archive: When (if) she breaks down it should be too late though. Archive: As soon as he leaves to go home he's confronted or something. Archive: Not killed, but confronted. [wcm]Mildob: we kind of agreed that the curse should take a long time to kill the MC [wcm]Mildob: like [wcm]Mildob: so the MC and the girl realise they're falling in love Archive: Ish. [wcm]Mildob: and it becomes a sort of race against time to figure out and beat this curse before he dies Archive: Sounds awesome. [wcm]Mildob: a long time as in a month or so Archive: A month would be good. Archive: It's not long enough to be too long but it's short enough to be tense. [wcm]Mildob: working multiple paths into to it might be tricky though Archive: Maybe. [wcm]Mildob: obviously in this there can only really be one girl Teh man: that's true [wcm]Mildob: i think it would be more down to how you go about researching/combatting the curse Teh man: limiting other routes possibility [wcm]Mildob: via the paranormal Horndawg |PRJ|: or we can just have a huge VN that incorporates all of these ideas like some sort of chapter like thing [wcm]Mildob: via science [wcm]Mildob: that would take years :V Kybe ^.^: yes Archive: Haha. [wcm]Mildob: so there could be... [wcm]Mildob: BAD END 1 - u suk diee [wcm]Mildob: BAD END 2 (science) Nyoro~n Churuya has been invited to chat. Archive: Eh. [wcm]Mildob: as in, it sort of worked [wcm]Mildob: but you have to never see each other again [wcm]Mildob: or something [wcm]Mildob: BAD END 3 (paranormal) [wcm]Mildob: gurl dies Kybe ^.^: the good ending better have sexeh time. Teh man: where does that leave the good ends? [wcm]Mildob: they all would probably Kybe ^.^: not into necrophilia dude [wcm]Mildob: lol Archive: Bad Ending - You Failed. Bad Ending - You attempt to stop it with Science, she dies but you survive. [wcm]Mildob: before the death fool [wcm]Mildob: well maybe [wcm]Mildob: i was thinking each method has 2 endings [wcm]Mildob: good and bad Horndawg |PRJ|: Yeah I'm totally not into the zone anymore Archive: So. [wcm]Mildob: and depending on how you go about each method [wcm]Mildob: so science one - try to create some sort of cure, science two - try to make a machine to repel the curse [wcm]Mildob: or something [wcm]Mildob: one would work, one wouldnt Teh man: how the hell is a high school student gonna make a cure using science? Archive: Science (Good): You both trap the supernatural factor. Science (Bad): You both attempt to trap the supernatural factor, but fail and it kills both of you. [wcm]Mildob: fuck knows Horndawg |PRJ|: sex is the cure Archive: Supernatural (Good): You both eat a hamburger. [wcm]Mildob: hmm [wcm]Mildob: actually i think it would be easier just to have the methods which are either destined to fail or succeed [wcm]Mildob: paranormal, science, hope/faith/the power of LURVE Horndawg |PRJ|: You try desperately to find a cure, but the clock ticks down the days, until there is only one day left. In a state of despair, you decide to spend the last night you have together in bed. Horndawg |PRJ|: The next morning, you notice that you haven't died yet Archive: Uhhh. Horndawg |PRJ|: And so ensues a huge massive fuck party Horndawg |PRJ|: to repel the curse Archive: Uhhh. Horndawg |PRJ|: lol Archive: No. [wcm]Mildob: well [wcm]Mildob: dont dismiss it yet [wcm]Mildob: it doesnt have to be "lol u sex me now" Teh man disconnected. Kybe ^.^: I like it. Teh man entered chat. [wcm]Mildob: more like "oh dear i dont think we're going to get anywhere, oh well, i love you anyway blah blah blah" Kybe ^.^: yes Teh man: yeah something like that Horndawg has changed their name to [a]. [a]: derp [a]: I am top now [wcm]Mildob: then the power of their love (rate me gaybow) negates the curse Teh man: oh really [wcm]Mildob: no dont, i havent got a single gaybow at all as far as im aware [a]: you fucker [wcm]Mildob: no srsly Teh man was kicked by [a]. BiN4RY has changed their name to [0]BiN4RY. [wcm]Mildob: and i must have about 10 dumbs, but moving on [wcm]Mildob: what the hell [0]BiN4RY: owned Teh man entered chat. Teh man: faggot [wcm]Mildob: ANYWAY Horndawg has changed their name to [00]. [wcm]Mildob: i think by dropping the discussion on the altern reality plot and going back to the curse we've subconsiously agreed that it's the best one [00]: So are we done for now? [0]BiN4RY has changed their name to [.]BiN4RY. [.]BiN4RY: bitch! [wcm]Mildob: stop it fagrat Horndawg has changed their name to [[00]. [.]BiN4RY: :smug: Horndawg has changed their name to ... [wcm]Mildob: one more time [.]BiN4RY has changed their name to ~]BiN4RY. Teh man: hello ~]BiN4RY has changed their name to ,BiN4RY. ,BiN4RY has changed their name to ...BiN4RY. Teh man: what the fuck is knytt stories ..: Cool game [wcm]Mildob: we're not done fags Teh man: ok, then continue [wcm]Mildob: [wcm]Mildob: i think by dropping the discussion on the altern reality plot and going back to the curse we've subconsiously agreed that it's the best one [wcm]Mildob: are we agreed? ..: Not me, but that's to be expected Teh man: i agree [wcm]Mildob: this is the real deal now, are we going to pursue this for the final plot? ..: sure [wcm]Mildob: infact stop ...BiN4RY has changed their name to !BiN4RY. [wcm]Mildob: there are people who arent here who want input !BiN4RY has changed their name to !!. [wcm]Mildob: dgg etc ..: I'll post it in the thread [wcm]Mildob: we should post this up