Here I have analysed your blog entry sentence by sentence. _________________________________________________________________________________ On the move.. In the recent past I had developed a new hobby. "In the recent past" It's much quicker to say "Recently". | "I had developed a new hobby." I *have* developed. Or you could say "I've developed". Whenever I look at a number I try to find the largest prime factor of the number. "Whenever I *see* a number I try to find the largest prime factor of *that* number." Sometimes the number itself happens to be the largest prime factor. This sentence is fine. I was on a short walk after dinner last Saturday. Then I saw the number of my neighboring block 403. The grammar is fine, but it could be joined with the next sentence using a commar (,). "I was on a short walk after dinner last Saturday, when I saw the number of my neighboring block, 403." It is the largest prime number I had ever encountered during my random hunt. *have* instead of had. The words "I" and "have" can be contracted to "I've" Why is it a "random" hunt? "It's the largest prime number I've ever encountered during my hunt." I logged into #math and asked people to tell the largest prime number they know. Almost. "I logged into #math and asked people to tell *me* the largest prime number they know." 1003, 7, xxxxx, are the answers I got in #math. Use "and" and don't put a commar (,) after "xxxxx". "1003, 7 and xxxxx are the answers I got in #math." 1003 happens to be the largest prime number in my memory as of now. While this sentence is correct, it could be shortened. "1003 is the largest prime number I know of". Here's the improved version: ______________________________________________________________________ Recently, I've developed a new hobby. Whenever I see a number I try to find the largest prime factor of that number. Sometimes the number itself happens to be the largest prime factor. I was on a short walk after dinner last Saturday, when I saw the number of my neighboring block, 403. It's the largest prime number I've ever encountered during my hunt. I logged into #math and asked people to tell me the largest prime number they know. 1003, 7 and xxxxx are the answers I got in #math. 1003 is the largest prime number I know of.